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No need for stupid phrases
And hollow lines
We have what we have
No need for lies
Looking into each others eyes
We see the truth
Often in disguise
In this deep love
No need to hide
Fell into her grace
Without a trace of any faults
She looks at me once more
In her purest smile
So lovely is she in this moment stuck in time
Every time I close my eyes
I still have her image imprinted in my mind
Going over and over in my head are these words
I love you
Just waiting for the moment they fit perfectly in
This moment without you
Just waiting for your love to fill this room so empty without you
Yet again I wait just to say I love you
Three words so simple
Cannot hold this emotion so complex
But yet you know how I feel
So the absents of the words is sealed with your lips
A kiss upon my lips of few words to describe
These moments with you
And how wonderful the feeling is to feel the love you hide
©2003-2009 ~NINTheFragile
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another one of my love/romance/emotional writings.. hope you enjoy... thx for reading...

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:iconmunkee1:
So warm and romantic! Great work on this piece. :)

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:iconninthefragile:
thanks much... :)

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconpreppie16:
I love this! :+fav: :hug: :blowkiss: This girl is really really lucky!!!!!! :) :hug:

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"You and I, we live and die. The world still spins around we don't know why." -Oasis

~preppie16 go on and get your kicks ;)
:iconninthefragile:
she is a very sweet and beautiful person.. she deservers every bit of it.. and much more... :) :hug: :blowkiss: :kiss: :love:

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconmisky:
you definately know how to catpture the meaning of love and how it feels. i like this poem alot.
:icongothicstitches:
so beautiful, i love it. the only thing i'd change is the first few lines at the tod, they repeat 'lies' twice... i'm a prefectionist... i'm not telling you to change it, its just something i noticed... i'm rambeling again, so i'm gunna go read some more of you stuff. oh and did i mention this poem is great?

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dead to the world
:iconhoshiboshi:
BEAUTFUL!! I'm not the poetic one but this poem just makes me feel how much you really love this girl.

Is it ok if i copy and paste it into my journal and give it a link cuz it describes perfectly how i feel about my girl?
:iconninthefragile:
yes its ok... just post a link and my user name... pls....
im glad you enjoyed this... thank you very much for the fav the comment and journal entry :)

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icontoby-triksel:
Nice. Very well done. The message here is very sweet. Eloquent. Well done.

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Live every day as if it were your last...
Because one day... it will be.

Toby

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