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when will this come true
my nights sky has turned to light blue
rain falls down on my sunny days
but yet she never stays
i look for her on the ground
but yet she is not to be found
i look on top the highest mountains
and the flattest planes
but yet the moment without her still remains
i look every where but yet still to be found
then i realize that she never was on the ground
her house is up in the clouds
in the heavens is where she can be found
flying with her angelic grace
with that beautiful smile upon her face
she looks down from the heavens just to see
to look for someone  to fly with
and that person was me
she gave me wings and we flew away
never to see another dark day
she showed me the heavens
and the streets of gold
and the savior and his home
we flew through the clouds to see the beauty of it all
i never found what i was looking for
something made from light and something so pure
then i looked to my side
and what did i see
i saw the angel flying with me
i kissed her lips and from there we fly
fly away with our love in the sky
©2003-2009 ~NINTheFragile
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a little fantasy/metaphoric love story... was very hard to expressing my feeling and emotions and my reality into this metaphor... but somehow i did it.. hope you enjoy this writing... thx for reading..

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:icongothicstitches:
yet another amazing poem. god your like the... GOD of poem writeing *worships the ground you walk on*

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dead to the world
:iconninthefragile:
lol rofl... thx much... but im definatly not god... or god of writing.. but thx for the complement... i just wrote alot of hopless stuff today.. that i jsut had to write something with a more romantic success story....

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icongothicstitches:
Still, i am going to make a shrine... the NINTheFragile shrine, surrounded by NIN posters and breakable things. LMAO i'm kidding. its nice to read a romantic success story, i think my only romantic success poem is Vampire Love, but then again its not really success because they're dead...

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dead to the world
:iconninthefragile:
and it did make it as the dev art fav for a week i think... im just glad i got to fav it befor it got famous lol.. causee i would never have read it... cause usualy the daly dev art fav's suck

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icontwisted-illusions:
oh sweet fluffy love poems ::sigh:: how did you get to writing so good?

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[link] <---gallery :heart:
let the world change you, and you can change the world.
°jark :heart: love for the resident yellow alien.
:iconninthefragile:
imagination... a girlfriend... a open mind... and to be freaken weird lol...

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icontwisted-illusions:
weirdness, ah, something we both have in common, lol.

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[link] <---gallery :heart:
let the world change you, and you can change the world.
°jark :heart: love for the resident yellow alien.
:iconcudlpnk:
Wow, that was spectactular, very nice, like always :)

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*HuG*
:iconninthefragile:
thx much . i got a question for you... how do you make the links to deviations that doesnt show as [link] but it shows as the deviation name... like this one would be Our Love In The Sky and it would be a link... who the foshizzle do you do that

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-

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