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Loves last breath is the chance thats left
Dreams last dance and I'm here to impress
Wear that dress and I'll do the rest
Hold on tight soon we'll see whats left

Loves last breath and a lovers last desire
The screams do grow like flames from the fire
In love or hate it no longer really matters
In this one breath this evening will truly expire

Loves last breath and a lovers last wish
If only he was here she would require his kiss
If only things where simple but not like this
Loves last breath gave way to coincidence
©2008-2009 ~NINTheFragile
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:icondragoshado5290:
I really like this alot
but to be honest it kinda teared me up
for i am haveing relationship problems
but yeah...
me and him are basically done
it may hurt me to let him go
but his memory is starting to kill me slowly
i need to get out

but still i love this
you did good =)
keep it up
:icondaiichi:
Now this is the NIN I know..This is a masterpiece..it can be dark, or sad, or just anything..and the images and rhythm hit hard and fast..

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:iconninthefragile:
thank you very much ... I wish you well with your relationship problem... Dont try to hold onto something that can only hurt you

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconninthefragile:
thank you very much my friend... I hope you are doing alot better since I last read your journal

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icondaiichi:
I am, thank you!

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:iconninthefragile:
no problem always got to check up on my friends... im glad your doing better was worried about you man after I read your journal... sounded like bad times.... I wish you well and Its good hearing from you

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icondaiichi:
Thanks again man

I'm thankful for your words and concern.

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I am a Shinra Organization Card-holding Member:

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:icondragoshado5290:
thats the thing....
i am holding on to something that is hurting me...
i need to get out
:iconcyre:
Multi-dimensional. This is an amazingly complex piece which is why I love it.

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe

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