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Eyes wonder the blue skies
Watching life as it flies by
Tell me how does it feel to survive
Tell me how does it feel to be alive

So many bellow without there life's
Living as if tomorrow never says goodbye
But me I know that line
But me Ive walked it many times

So tell me the news of the world
Show me the land you've earned
Lights fall down as I observe
But still life hits the curb

The beauty of the night sky
You may ask yourself why
Its a method of compensation
From the sadness of our creation

Death will be our only guide...
©2008-2009 ~NINTheFragile
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:iconcyre:
It all has to end. Revel in the moments of beauty because death comes swiftly and waits for no one...?

Did I hit or miss?

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
:iconninthefragile:
yes... hit!

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconcyre:
Yay!!! I'm glad I got it right...such profound meaning in this piece.

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe
:icondragoshado5290:
man this made me think of my ex

this part... Living as if tomorrow never says goodbye
But me I know that line
But me Ive walked it many times

for some reason made me think of him

i like this good work
:iconninthefragile:
thank you very much for the comments... I am glad you enjoy my work..

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:icondragoshado5290:
your very welcome
its really good =)
:iconrealityimpaired:
I really, really, really like this. It's morose and has a hint of macabre to it, but only ever so subtly.

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Find me
I'm falling
And fooling
Myself that it's flying..
:iconninthefragile:
thx much...

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
:iconrealityimpaired:
anytime :)

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Find me
I'm falling
And fooling
Myself that it's flying..

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