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Freedom From This Sin by ~NINTheFragile:iconNINTheFragile:



I don't think I can hold on much longer
I feel my heart slip into empty space
I don't think I can stand this much longer
You should be here to celebrate

To see something so pure be tainted by this plague
I cannot find hope no more, not in this world of shame

Please make this go away, Please make this go away
I cannot walk any further, this path has led me astray
So take this all away for my angel she no longer prays
Oh lord please lift her up to the flame and take away her pain

Its been my fault and only me is to blame, driving you insane
Step by step till nothings left, please take my soul away

I don't think I can make it to the end
I feel my heart skip a beat again
Take this heart and rip it apart
But give it to the one who bares my name

I hope to never see you like this again
No, I hope you now are free from my sin
©2008-2009 ~NINTheFragile
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:iconsalva-veritate:
The third stanza is my favorite.. <333 I love this it's so thoughtful and deep...

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"Humans were originally created with 4 arms, 4 legs and a head with two faces. Fearing their power, Zeus split them into two separate parts, condemning them to spend their lives in search of their other halves."
-Plato
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i really love this alot
i feel it strongly
it goes deep within me
all through me

great job
:iconcyre:
I can relate to this.

Its beautiful.

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"To Dream by Day is to be cognizant of many things which escape those who merely dream by night"
-Poe

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